Unsure about what exactly is the concept Omnibus ambition – your want a app that does everything Your target group is maybe too diverse to address in one app Really challenging to address such a big target group Zoom in instead
Great that you have an ambition to integrate social media into the app – but you don’t show how you do it.
It seemed like a webshop – but you say it is for a magazine – you need to be clear on your objectives
You have to use your moodboard actively – you need to be more specific. Which images can tell the right story
You havn’t narrowed down your idea strongly enough You need to narrow own your target group and the gap in the market where your can use the app
Good idea with the giftcard You have a lot of potential but need to focus
Feedback from Rikke:
SvarSletUnsure about what exactly is the concept
Omnibus ambition – your want a app that does everything
Your target group is maybe too diverse to address in one app
Really challenging to address such a big target group
Zoom in instead
Great that you have an ambition to integrate social media into the app – but you don’t show how you do it.
It seemed like a webshop – but you say it is for a magazine – you need to be clear on your objectives
You have to use your moodboard actively – you need to be more specific. Which images can tell the right story
You havn’t narrowed down your idea strongly enough
You need to narrow own your target group and the gap in the market where your can use the app
Good idea with the giftcard
You have a lot of potential but need to focus